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If Only

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You.
You could.
You could have.
You could have had...
The girl,
not just any girl,
THE girl.
The one
with the beauty.
The eyes.
So deep you drown in the.
The lips.
SO perfect, that only wanted to kiss you.
The nose,
so cute,
that only wanted to smell your sweet scent.
The eyebrows.
Perfectly arched,
holding back a smirk or a look of surprise.
You.
You could.
You could have.
You could have had...
The girl,
not just any girl,
THE girl.
The one
with the
brains.
The wisdom.
With the intellect that was unmeasurable.
The wit.
Unmatchable with the sarcasm that was always timed, oh so well.
The comebacks,
so quick,
you would have thought time had to be stopped to come up with them.
The advice.
The best you could get from anywhere around.
You.
You could.
You could have.
You could have had...
The girl,
not just any girl,
THE girl.
The one
with the
loyalty.
The arms.
That only wished to embrace you.
The fingers.
That only wanted to run through your hair.
The eyes.
That only wanted to stare into yours and loose all train of thought.
The ears.
That only wanted your heart beat to listen to.
The soul.
That only wanted..you.
You.
You could.
You could have.
You could have had...
The girl,
not just any girl,
THE girl.
You.
You could.
You could have.
You could have had...
her.
But it's too late, she's gone.
You lost you're only chance,
you could have had her.
But not anymore:
It's too late, she's gone.
for a great friend of mine who had her heart broken....actually wrote this awhile ago but never got around to posting it. critiques are welcome :)
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loverdearestt's avatar
This is so incredible. <3